Thursday 1 September 2016

skiing poem

“5 SECONDS” “5” my legs are shaking “4”  I think I’m going to die
“3” I have Butterflies in my Tummy
“2” I am scared “1” ok! I’m ready!
GO GO GO!
I’m on the track, I’m doing well
Faster Faster Faster!
There is the Finish line
tak tak tak!  I did it!

2 comments:

  1. Great effort Luke, You have used lots of language features!

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  2. Great effort Luke, You have used lots of language features!

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